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I knew from the moment I saw that, thing, I was no longer in reality. But, everything seemed so vague, yet so surreal at the same time. The sounds, the feeling, everything. And, I knew where I was. In a forest. A forest near my house.
It was probably past midnight, and I couldn't tell whether there was a full or new moon. The trees had thick branches that made it impossible to see anything through.
That thing, what was it? It may have been too dark for me to see it completely, but I could tell it was huge. Huge and bulky. And it's feeding on something. It looks like, a human. Or to be more specific, a newly fresh corpse that had been ripped in half. The thing was eating something long, probably the corpse's intestines and drinking its blood also.
As quickly and quietly as I could, I jumped behind a huge old oak tree. But, I didn't seem that quiet enough for the thing, because in that millisecond, it stared directly at the old oak tree. It quickly turned away from its midnight snack, and looked in my direction.
Oh ********... Please, I don't wanna die. Please!, I thought to myself. With no say in my actions, I slyly looked towards it and saw it quickly crawl-jumping towards me. I immediatly stiffened up. I wanted to run, but my legs wouldn't respond to the command. I wanted to scream bloody-murder for help, but it suddenly got caught in my throat. I heard it come closer and closer to me, and then suddenly...
- by olive you most |
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- | Submitted on 03/13/2010 |
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- Title: Monster
- Artist: olive you most
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Description:
I've had this in my documents for over 2 years. I edited it a bit and decided to add it to the arenas. I'll add a new chapter every week.
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This is the prolouge of the story. The main character is a 16 year old girl named November and she's having a lot of strange dreams that happens to be a sign. - Date: 03/13/2010
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Comments (1 Comments)
- InvidiaDiaboli - 03/11/2011
- Mm!! Cliffhanger! Oh well. I cannot wait for the next chapter. I really love how detailed you are in the writing; everything is like a movie in my head. Keep up the good work! smile
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