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My hip throbbed as my gun had pressed up against it as I was shoved into a seat against my will as they threatened you with a gun. I was helpless, and I couldn't protect you. The man holding you licked your neck, and the incomprehensible frustration caused my heart to beat faster.
I was relieved when he stopped taunting me and my helplessness. I then gasped when he choked you with his forearm and pointed the gun back towards your temple.
He then yelled at me to go behind the counter and fill the bags he then threw at me with money. I followed his orders without hesitation, and threw him the bag I'd filled so quickly with thousands, or perhaps millions, or dollars.
I was then thrown back into my chair by another gunman with a maroon balaclava, and with a grunt, was once again reminded of the gun as it slammed against my hip.
I felt my anxiousness creeping back up my spine, and I started to shake my leg. I then noticed that the man with the maroon balaclava had turned around, and with swift movement, pulled the gun from my pocket, grabbed him around the neck, and hastily pointed at the man holding you. I felt my heart speed up once more, adrenaline pumping through my body.
I told the man to give me my wife, to which he replied by shooting the man I had grabbed, and taunted me once again with maniacal laughter, and then shot you.
I felt a tear roll down my cheek before the bullet had made it's way through your head, and blood splattered in the direction you were shot, and I let out my full ammunition on your killer as you fell towards the ground with your empty, beautiful eyes, which would no longer see.
I then yelled and got to my knees, and crawled over to you and held your body, which no longer held your sublime soul. I felt great despair tumble over my body like an avalanche upon the realisation of what I planned to do next.
I then grabbed the gun that took your life and pointed it to my temple, just as it was pointed to yours, and without hesitation, pulled the trigger.
Now we can be happy together.
- by Mister Corsion |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 03/13/2010 |
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- Title: Hostage Situation
- Artist: Mister Corsion
- Description: A situation based on a dream I had.
- Date: 03/13/2010
- Tags: true love hostage situation
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Knight Yoshi - 04/29/2011
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- Mister Corsion - 03/27/2010
- Thank you for the kind comment. I thought it was a little short myself.
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- Yuki Uematsu - 03/26/2010
- I felt suddenly thrown into the story. It was such an adrenaline-based story. The rush of the event just made the story so focused into that place and time. The sorrow of the man in the story made the finale very dramatic. It all came up so well-put. Yet... you should've made the story a bit longer. More detail on the beginning. Not bad though. Just a tiny bit more length with detail. Overall, 5 stars.
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