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PROLOGUE
“Laer! Laer wait, please!” My brother called after me, struggling to keep up with me as I darted through the trees. My long dark hair fanned out behind me as I ran, smiling enthusiastically as the forest in which I lived moved around me in a blur.
Suddenly the atmosphere around me grew more grim and dark – it was foreboding and less reassuring. I stopped, waiting for my brother but he did not come. I looked around to see nothing but the trees.
“Rusc?” I called, growing scared now. I gained no response and I felt tears well in my eyes as I began to run back the way I had come. In my frantic state everything appeared the same and I soon found myself completely lost. I curled up in a small hollow amongst a large tree’s roots and soon fell fast asleep.
When I woke there was a tall being standing in front of me, frowning in concern. I whimpered softly in fear before they slowly knelt down, reaching towards me. I was unsure how to respond but they seemed to be offering me their hand – I took it.
As soon as our hands touched, something burned within me and I began to cry, unsure of what it was. I could hear cruel laughter and the hand let go. I stumbled backwards against the tree, clutching my head which pounded terribly. I screamed for help but no one came and soon, I fell into the realm of unconsciousness.
- by cre8ive_ovadose |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 03/29/2010 |
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- Title: Laerenosir - Excerpt
- Artist: cre8ive_ovadose
- Description: Okay so this is an excerpt of a story I'm thinking of writing and I'd really appreciate some feedback on it - constructive criticism, opinions, interest, anything really. Anyway, I hope you liked it and thanks for reading :) CBL
- Date: 03/29/2010
- Tags: laerenosir excerpt prologue girl fantasy
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