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*We see the van drive an hour later. It's silent.*
*There's a bandage around Luis' arm.*
JoAnna: Alright, I know it's been a crazy day. Let's just forget that even happened.
Vince: Yeah, let's just try and enjoy the day.
Holly: We're gonna have a good day. How's your arm doing, Luis?
Luis: It's okay.
Tiffany: Ugh, I just need a drink badly.
Holly: I'm sure she has some stuff.
*She smiles.*
*They pull up to a large rusted house. It looks abandoned and the doors and walls are missing.*
Ryan: So...this is the house?
*JoAnna gets out of the van. Holly gets out too.*
JoAnna: Are you sure this is it?
Holly: This can't be it. But...this is where the road their house is on.
*Everyone else gets out.*
*They all take a good look at the house.*
Luis: So...where's the barbaque?
Holly: This can't be right...
Ryan: Man. I was looking forward to a drink too.
*Holly walks up to the house.*
Holly: This isn't right.
JoAnna: Doesn't look like they live here anymore.
*Holly shakes her head.*
*Karine sees a "Pool" sign.*
Karine: Heyy Vince! Want to go to the pool??
Vince: Yeah!
Tiffany: Uhh--hey-hey-hey. We need to stick together.
Ryan: She's right.
Vince: Don't worry, we'll be right back.
*Karine smiles.*
JoAnna: Just make sure you past those two sheds on your way there. You should see a pool there. Good luck.
*They laugh and run off.*
Luis: Man...
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*We see Vince and Karine running past the sheds, away from the house, holding hands.*
*They start yelling and laughing.*
*Karine is swinging her small jacket around as they run and Vince laughs.*
*They run closer to their destination and run down a hill.*
*Vince suddenly trips and falls.*
Karine: Ohh-are you ok?
*Vince slowly gets up.*
*He then checks his clothes that he stained.*
Vince: Crap...
*Karine laughs and breathes deeply.*
Karine: Oh wow. How did they ever get up and down here? Its a workout.
Vince: Ugh yeah. So where's this pool at?
Karine: I'm not sure.
*They look ahead and see the farm.*
*They walk closer.*
*Five minutes pass and they are at the barn.*
Vince: Do Holly and JoAnna's grandparents live there?
Karine: They might.
*They walk to the backyard and see a tractor engine on.*
Vince: Somebody must live here. Their tractor is on.
Karine: How do you know it's there's?
Vince: Well who's else would it be?
*Karine doesn't reply.*
*They then walk alongside the house.*
Vince: I'm sure somebody has to be home.
Karine: I'm not sure.
*They approach the front door of the house.*
Karine: I wonder where their pool is.
*Vince knocks on the door.*
Vince: Hello? Is anybody home?
*Pause.*
*Vince walks in a small circle and knocks on the door again as Karine sits down on the porch, with her back facing him.*
Vince: Someone has to be here.
*He sees a tooth on the ground. He smirks and picks it up.*
*He walks over to Karine and hands it to her. Karine jumps and throws it.*
Karine: My God. Let's go!
*She then gets up and walks over to the bench.*
*Vince then hears something in the house. He looks inside and looks down the hallway, and sees a door open.*
*He hears a noise again.*
Vince: Hey, Karine!
Karine: (from bench) Let's go!
*Vince opens the door a bit.*
*He looks inside and walks inside. He walks down the hallway and to the room. He then trips and we see a large man with a mask holding a sledgehammer.*
*The man then raises the sledgehammer and smacks Vince in the head with it. Vince falls down on the ground and starts twitching with blood coming out his mouth.*
*The man hits Vince again with it. Vince dies. The man drags Vince's body in the room and slams the metal door shut.*
Karine: (from bench) Vince?
*She slowly gets up. She then begins to walk toward the house.*
Karine: Vince...?
*She approaches the entrance door, opens it.*
*She slowly walks inside and closes the door.*
Karine: Vince...?
*She slowly walks down the hallway. She enters a room on her right. She hears something.*
Karine: Vince?
*She stops for a minute.*
*She then etners the room. She trips over a vase and falls on the floor.*
*We hear a chicken bocking.*
*She slowly kneels up and sees the chicken inside a cage, bocking and clucking.*
*She has a scared look on her face. She then looks at the ground.*
*We see a whole bunch of rotting teeth.*
*She looks up and sees bone hands and fingers hanging from the ceiling.*
*She then sees broken jaws on the ground in the corner. She sees bone arms on the ground as well.*
*The chicken clucks louder.*
*She looks around and sees bone legs forming a crossbone.*
*We see skulls on counters.*
*We also see a sculpture of an art made of bones and teeth.*
*Karine sudddenly begins to cough.*
*She coughs louder, gagging.*
*She tears and coughs more.*
*Karine starts panicking and she quickly gets up, feeling dazed, coughing.*
Karine: Vincent!!
*She leaves the room.*
*When she gets to the hallway, the killer opens the metal door and sees Karine.*
*Karine screams and begins running to the door as the killer runs after her.*
*Karine gets to the porch, almost escaping but the killer wraps his arms around her from behind and starts dragging her back inside.*
*She begins screaming like crazy, trying to break free, but his grip is too tight.*
*Karine throws herself everywhere, but the killer smirks and takes her to the room.*
*Inside the room, Karine still tries breaking free. The killer suddenly turns her around and picks her up.*
*The killer then raises her up and places her back on a hook, hanging from the ceiling.*
*Karine screams deeper and rapidly, and grabs the metal bar of the hook, over her head.*
*She screams more as the killer slowly approaches the counter.*
*He grabs his chainsaw.*
*He then turns it on. Karine's screams cant be heard.*
*The killer then starts slicing Vince's dead body with the chainsaw as Karine watches.*
*Karine screams more, in extreme pain...*
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*Forty-five minutes later, back at the van.*
Holly: Well, I guess we're not having a barbaque. I dont know where my grandparents are. I'm not even sure if they still live here.
Tiffany: So what are we gonna do?
*Pause.*
Luis: Guess we're going back home.
Tiffany: Alright. Guess we have no other choice.
Ryan: Where's Vince and Karine?
Holly: Not sure. But i'll--
JoAnna: I'll go look for them.
*Short pause.*
Luis: You sure?
JoAnna: Yeah, don't worry about it. I'll just get them real quick that way we can have a barbaque over at our house.
*Holly giggles.*
Holly: Alright, be careful, sis.
JoAnna: Dont worry I will.
*JoAnna walks off.....*
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TO BE CONTINUED! biggrin
- by XCherrehCokeX3 |
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- | Submitted on 05/09/2010 |
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- Title: TexasChainsawMsscre(remake)pt2
- Artist: XCherrehCokeX3
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Heyy! It's the second part to my remakeee! =]
ENJOY! Rates and comments would be greatt! - Date: 05/09/2010
- Tags: texaschainsawmsscreremakept2
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Comments (2 Comments)
- XxVioletRainxX - 10/25/2010
- made me hold my breath. and only a few stories make me like that. that.was.intense.
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- xXIcecream_PieXx - 05/12/2010
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scary D:
haha
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