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Mai:
Today's Christie's party! I get out my party outfit. It''s a gold tank top, A blue skirt with a diamond belt, and some gold sandals with a gold headband. I do what I usually do in the morning. It's 12:50. I have enough time to get there by 1:30. As soon as you know it, I'm out the door. Walking down the street. Okay, now turn left. Then right....no left. Ugh. Oh wait, I think I see her house. It's blue and white just like she said. I knock on the door. It's 1:07 now. Somebody opens the door. It's her mom. ''Why, hello Mai. Christie is in her room. You may come in.'' She greets me. I thank her and walk up her stairs to her room. I carry the bag of games to her room. I see Christie reading a book, and then she finally notices me. ''Oh, Mai! Your here so early! Thanks for bringing your games. Your a big help.'' She tells me. ''It's no problem. I bought my new game too!'' I reply. ''Cool!'' She replied back. I hear a knock on the door from downstairs. Christie hears it too. We walk downstairs and we see Christie's mom opening the door. Jamie is here with Alica and Kyra. ''Hey, guys.'' I greet them. ''Hey'' Jamie, Alica, and Kyra reply. ''Guys, my neighbors might be late. Were gonna go ahead and go in the basement. My dad bought a new T.V.'' Christie says. We follow her down to the basement. I take my Girl's band game out the bag. Everybody is dieing to try it. I place the game in her console. I grab the guitar, Christie takes the drums, Jamie decides to do vocals, Kyra with the bass, and Alica is on the keyboard.
Jamie selects a song she can sing. The song is called, ''Tears falling down''. I have to admit Jamie sings pretty well. Everybody presses the color button at the right time. They all look like they played it before! Finally the song ends with, ''Tears fall down...''. Then everybody puts there instrument in the box. Everybody hears an knock on the door. Her mom opens the door, and Christie's neighbors come down in the basement. ''Guys, I'd like you to be Niya, Camille, and Yuna'' Christie says. Her neighbors greet hello. We greet back. ''Well, I'll go get some pizza and snacks.'' Christie finally blurts out. She walks up.
Christie:
As I'm carrying the food down, I place it on the table. I cut a slice for everybody. Everybody says it's nice.
- by ChannyCombo |
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- | Submitted on 07/01/2010 |
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- Title: Summer Breeze Chapter 3
- Artist: ChannyCombo
- Description: It's time for Christie's party! Will it be a disaster? Will something go wrong? Will something big happen? Read and find out! Tears falling down isn't a real song. It was made up by me.
- Date: 07/01/2010
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ChannyCombo - 07/18/2010
- @ verstummen, thanks. I'm trying real hard on my grammar.....I'm taking a class next school year.
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- vv7722 - 07/01/2010
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It's well written! Just not much action. It seems very real.
However, I wouldn't keep reading just because it's a little boring.
You're a good writer, though! Keep it up. - Report As Spam