- "Yup, I said it." I said, "Why, please give me another chance." He says. "I never want to see your face anymore, now you should get to your other girlfriend." A shadow comes behind him and says, "Your other girlfriend?" He looks around and stood there. Now he starts to look at both of us. "You cheated on me?" The girl says. "Really he cheated on me, and now he's here to beg me to stay with him." The girl smacks him across the face and leaves. He looks at me and I walk around him. He grabs me and tried to pull me close. I pulled away, and left him alone. "Don't touch me." I said, he stays there watching me walk away. Now we're both in school, he tries to talk to me. I start to ignore him and walk away. A couple of months passed, and the school prom came by. I came to the prom, he walks to me. But then he sees I have a boyfriend. He starts to back off. The host announced "The votes are in for the prom queen and king." He calls out my name and my ex boyfriend's name. I stood there and saw him. I wore the crown. He asks me to dance with him. I said "No." I left the prom and then I never saw him again .
- by Angry ayah12345678910 |
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- | Submitted on 01/07/2011 |
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- Title: Don't Come Back
- Artist: Angry ayah12345678910
- Description: I got bored and i wrote this....
- Date: 01/07/2011
- Tags: dont come back
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Lunirark - 01/20/2011
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Instead of just stating the actions, describe them.
The story line is also choppy and hard to follow. Paragraphs are your friend.
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