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Fate, they say fate is nothing more then a path way into the forest, the shadows of the tree's blocking your view as you take you first look inside. With every step we push threw time, one step in front of the other as we follow our path of fate. Every path is different to each person, some leading them to fame and fortune, some to peace and hope, others to torment and death. What awaits for you at the end of your path no one knows, you just have to push on to see.
Every turn, every hill, every encounter you meet on your path of fate is nothing but a challenge laid before you, testing your skills, testing your strength and even testing your mind to see if you are ready to push on. Many fall from these tests, giving up or taking there own lives before they reached the end.
There are a few who believe they can change there fate by leaving there path, pushing threw the tree's in seek of another path, blinding them in lie's of a better life. In time they start to believe this, believing in what they did was right until there path comes for them, dragging them back on to there path of fate like a wild dog, being dragged by the leash threw the stones of dirt before leaving them in a mess.
No matter our fate in this world we must push on, fighting our way to what we deserve no matter it is life or death. It is our calling to move forward and seek what life truly means for us before it is taken away by the clawed hands of the Reaper himself.
Will you take the first step?
- by TheGreedsin |
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- | Submitted on 05/08/2011 |
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- Title: The Path Of Fate
- Artist: TheGreedsin
- Description: A idea of fate as it is, a simple idea of how your life has already been decided for you.
- Date: 05/08/2011
- Tags: path fate
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Comments (1 Comments)
- ThermoNuclearNun - 07/01/2011
- It's got a nice flow to to it, but right away, I noticed some grammatical errors and typos that made it hard to read. "More then" should be "more than", etc....nitpicky stuffy like that. Grammar is a big deal in writing. Be careful with your misspellings; it makes your writing look un-professional. Other than that, you have talent. smile
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