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I walk on to the stage.
I look out to see many people.
'Is this a dream?' I thought.
The song started to play.
I sang, 'Concrete Angel.'
I cried when I sang.
A little girl, dieing from her mothers hands.
But at the end is finally free was this world.
I was done and got off stage, and went out side and praid for the kids that were hurting.
- by iiHugs4Free |
- High School Flashback
- | Submitted on 07/31/2009 |
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- Title: talen show
- Artist: iiHugs4Free
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Description:
i sang the song, 'Concrete Angel' in 5th grade and this is the flashback.
- Date: 07/31/2009
- Tags: talen show
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Comments (5 Comments)
- fruit4you - 09/30/2014
- It lacks rhythm and flow. The structure is a little wonky, but I still enjoyed it. It had emotion in it. Keep writing! smile
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- emygrl99 - 07/03/2011
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Nice! 5/5
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- Xx_BittyBoo_xX - 11/28/2010
- that was so amazing like a poem
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- Undefinedpeanutbutter - 09/03/2009
- it is sweet that you prayed and that song concrete is a good song
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- Sushi Soldier - 08/12/2009
- Ah, this is in poem form so I thought it was in the wrong arena. Also, "prayed" is the correct form.
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