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clear windows all around me.
and i begin to watch as the rain drops beat agains them.
i think of all the things that i should have done better...
words is cant understand go through my mind.
shuddly im snaped back to reality when the school bell rings.
as i walk down the hall way i stair at the ground and just trie to walk as it feals like its getting smaller and smaller.
i hear wispers and i could make out some. they said " she looks like a gost " or " who is she "
i look at the ones that are staring at me. i look back down knowing that i have done more to myself then they ever could.. i remember the friends i had back at the one town i scually fit in.
but now im just another outcast faking a smile and giving myself a mask to live with for the rest of my life. but when i see him...my dad.....some how he makes me live.....live like every other...but to feel like more he always tells me no matter where i am or who i begin to live with....he says i can never die when i allready live...and i told him.. " dad you make me live "
but when i go out into susiedy i hide....when im alone...out there... im afraid...bc so many ppl have allready beat me almost to death......but when im with him....my dad... he is my life...he is......WHO I AM
- Title: My DaD is my life
- Artist: Ahayshay
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my dad is my life
my dad is my soul
my dad
is my dad - Date: 08/05/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Raynai - 08/05/2009
- I gave you a three because I love the content of your submission. High school is a hard place, and I can relate to finding solace only in the comfort of an encouraging parent. However, your grammar and punctuation made it a hard read to enjoy. I think if you pasted this onto Word and did a quick spell check, a lot more people would take your work that much more seriously. Keep writing! I'm a Grammar Freak at heart, and I know
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