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"You look wonderful tonight." he commented. His voice sounded like melting chocolate.
I stared deeply into his pupils. The color of his eyes were so radiant.
That's when I had realized--he had been there all along. Through everything.
"Thank you..." I whispered to myself, as I was to shy to say it aloud to him.
He started leaning towards me, slowly. I knew what he wanted to do.
I echoed his movement. A little closer now, and my life would be complete.
A little more...finally. His soft lips met mine, and I had fallen into heaven.
The bells-they were ringing. It felt as if I was glowing or maybe even floating. I closed my eyes so I could soak it all in.
I wanted to keep in this position forever, but he let go, as did I, and we both grinned at eachother.
"Thank you."
- Title: The Kiss
- Artist: iEcstatic
- Description: Ahaha, sappy, I know. This is my very first time submitting something, so cut me a lil' slack. xP
- Date: 11/25/2008
- Tags: kiss thanks wonderful
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Blue Forgotten Angel - 06/28/2009
- BTW if anybody wanted to know my story is Earthly Angel. PLS READ AND COMMENT
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- Blue Forgotten Angel - 06/28/2009
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wow... sooooo cute! i plan to have something like that in my story XD sooo awesome
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- 0r1g1nal - 02/11/2009
- frenchy it dont matter how old she its a cute story u r just jelious bc u couldn't write something like this!
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- Capir_carinoe - 01/06/2009
- thats really cute.
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- frenchy_03 - 12/25/2008
- o please i felt like i ws going to puke!!!!!!................and how old are you becuase if you are older then me i would under stand why you'd write that.................and just in case you ? i am 13
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- The Tiniest Mortician - 12/07/2008
- I like it... Wait.. LOVE IT. owo
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