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The cold chill...it was returning. Her fingers turned numb and an unsightly shade of purple. The cold feeling was like a nightmare hanging on to her imagination; it made her spine shiver so intensely that it shook her whole body. Shadows. Shadows everywhere; closing in and killing the lazy lights. They engulfed everything never stopping, never quitting; they held treacherous truths and loathing lies. She didn't dare move from this new steel armour she encased herself in, she longed for the warmth she had so easily lost her self-control to. The faint smell of alcohol tickled her gentle nose however the retched smell brought forth memories she had tried so hard to bury away deep in her mind. A dreadful crash broke the disturbing silence. Was she going mad? Or are the unscrupulous sounds just wild hallucinations? She held her breath trying to build up the courage to sprint, sprint as fast as she could manage; fighting to stay alive against something that she hadn't even seen, just sensing and fearing it.
The door creaked like time had rusted the very hinges, her hair danced around her once prefectly painted pot doll face. She could see nothing but haunting shadows. She counted down losing her voice to the smothering emptiness.
To be continued....
- by xXxI luv JohnnyxXx |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: An Icy Street
- Artist: xXxI luv JohnnyxXx
- Description: I was outside one day and I suddenly got an impulse to write, I got inspired by the Icy Streets and some of the horrible crimes people have been commiting lately. So here's the first two paragraphs i've written so far, if people think it's bad then i'll ditch the rest of it. Btw this is my 1st piece of writing tht i've submitted so it will be really bad. lol, but i hope you all like it...
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: street
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Comments (7 Comments)
- greenkazoo123 - 11/30/2009
- whoa. This is really good. I really want to read the rest.
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- bailybaby972 - 10/02/2009
- this is really good smile you should definitly continue it! 5/5
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- zox-emo-roxas-xoz - 12/23/2008
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Very good, but I don't think it should be in non-fiction, even if it's 'based' on true events. It's still then considered fiction.
It was pretty good, and I thought she was mental for a minute, not running from a criminal. - Report As Spam
- cantartee - 12/15/2008
- 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000!
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- cantartee - 12/15/2008
- AWESOME =D its beautiful... ugh i might cry relly lol :')
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- lanilei_is_awsome - 12/13/2008
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wow u shuld finish it
it was realy good - Report As Spam