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INTRO.
A young girl sits in her room. She's trying to hold back the tears, but they came tumbling down. She can hear the screaming and yelling of her parents. She hates the way they never stop fighting.
She gets up and turns on her TV. They got louder. She couldn't stand it. So she turned her radio on and raised the volume. She heard a big crash. She ran into her closet and turned her ipod way up.
She hated her life. Her parents never stop. Half of her house were broken plates and furniture. Her house was a war zone. There were battle scars all over the walls. At some places there were little dents in the walls and at others, pieces of the wall chipped away by plates. In the kitchen, some glass was still stuck in the wall.
You could see glass shardes everywhere you went. And with it her parents blood stains. Of course, they never died, but they were always in the hospital getting stiches. Either that or they got knocked out by a flying pan or getting a gaint piece of glass out of their arm.
She had tried many times to stop them, but the last time she ended up in the emergency room for 17 days. Her dad, while fightingyet again with his wife, threw a glass bowl straight at her head. She had to get the glass out surgecly. She nearly deid because a piece of glass. If it went in a centimeter deeper into her head she would have died. Now she has a metal plating in her head and many stiches, about 124 to be exact.
While she was in the hopsital, her parents visited her, but she gave them the cold shoulder. She would never forgive them for what they did. Not only did they physicaly hurt her, but they hurt her emotionally, too.
She hated her parents with all the hatred that she could find inside her. She couldn't belive that her parents would put her through that. She thought that parents are always supposed to help you out of problems, not get you into them.
Her parents had permanently changed her. She will never be the sam again. She hasn't said a word since she came back from the hospital. Her parents thought she would never speak again.
- by Angelically_Enlightened |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/19/2008 |
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- Title: Broken Dreams
- Artist: Angelically_Enlightened
- Description: I started writing my own book. it may look small (to me) but it was a lot bigger on papper. Please tell me what u thing about it every once in a while ill add the next chapter (maybe) if a lot of poeple like it, so please comment or pm me if u want more of the story and i'll put it up
- Date: 12/19/2008
- Tags: broken dreams
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Comments (7 Comments)
- And There it Is - 05/17/2010
- *sniffles* ;~; bravo just bravo ;~;
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- Vibrant Danie - 08/12/2009
- Very good. I loved it. Please write more...
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- Robot Squirrel - 01/25/2009
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Aaaw....
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It's a bit choppy and there are some misspeled words, but it's very cute and dramatic.
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- BorisAndrei - 01/05/2009
- its pretty good i have already writen a book but its on a flash drive this could be a gr8 story hope you keep at it
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- Oxii Clean - 12/25/2008
- this looks like it would turn out into a great book! a few typos but it still would be a great book. r u going to add another part to this?
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- Nilba - 12/23/2008
- you have potential, just need to work on Grammar, but keep writting your off to a good start!
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- PuNkRoCkPrInCeSs30 - 12/22/2008
- i like the idea of this story it is really good other than some common grammer mistakes. Keep writing it, i know it will get more intriguing as you write.
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