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Fire...
Can't see out of my window. Why is there fire, I ask myself. It justed started when I sleeped in my bed. I wake up with a click on my door. Could'nt open it, called out for mom, but she answared with a scream. They tok her outside...
But I can't see her out of my window, there is too much fire. And smoke.
I can only hear angry woises, and scared screams.
I can't get breath, because I am too scared and all the smoke fells like it only wants to come inside my lunges.
Mom, I try to called out, but I cant, I am too scared. What is happening to Eeglania? Whats happening to my moms loyal people?
So I hear a scream. Not a man scream, not a normaly woman scream.
A mom scream.
Mom! What happen? I wanna come out! Come on stupid door! Come on, come on! I taking my sword and crused the door and just run. Run down the 100 stairs, run out of the door. Run back and toke my puppy and run away again.
My mom is dead, I allready know. But I don't want to see it. I cried out in the night with my puppy Mishi...
Its a week ago. Have just drinked the raindroppes and eat grass, and run. I don't know were I am. Mishi is dead. I have eat her. I did'nt want to eat her, but if I haven't done so, I would be dead too. But I am very, very thirsty. And I miss my mom, my dog and even my guardian Qlien. But there is no water, and I am alone, and I am angry. That was the Eeglania people! I hate them! HATE HATE HATE them!! They killed my mom, and because of them, I have to eat my puppy Mishi! hate hate hate....
"Sorry, but who are you?"
I look back. She has a big head with big manga-like eyes, and a small body. I stud up. "My name is... wait, you aren't an Eeglanianer are you?" "An Englander? No no, I even come from the Earth.." "No, an Eeglanianer!" "Whats that? Im just a Gaia..." "What country do you come from?" "I... ehm... I just come from Gaiaonline okay?" "Gaiaonline??" "Yeah, go at your computer and write www.gaiaonline.com and wula!" She said and laught. I could'nt see the joke. "Ehm... what is a computer?" Now she laugh even more. I never get the answer. I could'nt wait anymore until she was finish so I start to go away.
Continues...
- Title: Try stop me!
- Artist: Sig1ne2
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Her mom queen of Eeglania has been killed by the angry towners. Now she angry, and wanna attack all the unloyal people.
But are all so unloyal? - Date: 12/22/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- The Bored Procrastinator - 01/28/2010
- Totally great, but you CAN fix it to fiction instead of nonfiction
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- thomlina - 12/30/2009
- very cool
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- vanna9888 - 04/14/2009
- That is nonfiction ..... Good story though
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- Sig1ne2 - 12/23/2008
- Argh! Forget! It is the wrong fiction! But thanks for the comment, Ill try to figure it out XP
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- olddaysgone - 12/22/2008
- that was a great story but i have some bad news this is non fiction which means it must happened in real life but it was cool
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