- It had been my birthday when the killer came. It was Friday the 13th..my birthday. The dreaded of all days. I was down staris when i heard a crash! That's when mama screamed: "No! No!" screamed Mama as the killer came closer "Get away from me!" Mama was screaming from the top of her lungs. Blood was on her shirt and pants. The killer had already killed my daddy,aunt,and two cousins. All dripping with blood. The killer was wearing a plain white hocky mask covered with blood. He also wore a long black trench coat also with blood on it. He was just covered in blood. He had a long blood drenched knife in his right hand. He was coming closer and closer when my older brother,Darin,came out from behind the couch with a butcher knife in his hands! "AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! GET AWAY FROM MY MOM YOU b***h!" screamed Darin at the top of his lungs. The killer turned around to face him. He held his sword and ran to him! But sadly my brother was beheaded. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!"screamed Mama even louder! I was hiding behind the flipped over coffee table. I was scared as hell right now! I was afraid he would kill the rest of my family. But instead of killing mama he whispered something to her. "Kill Becky....Kill her now...KILL!" the killer wispered to mama. Next thing I know she's trying to kill me! She kept saying "Kill Becky...Kill her now....KILL!" . Ran as fast as I could trying to get away from mama. She look like a crazed vampire! She had fangs,wings and and claws! She was holding the butcher's knife Darin had. It was also drenched in blood. I ran inside the hallway broom closet trying to get away. When she got to the hallway she said"Oh becky Dear! Where are you? I want to show you something!' She kicked in a door as she said it. "Damn! She's not in the bathroom." She kicked in the next door. "Or in her room." She kicked every room door in the hallway. "She wouldn't be in hallway closet would she?" said Mama as kicked in the door."OH GOD!" I screamed. The killer soon came up stairs and both mama and killer grabed me and draged me down stairs. When we down stairs my family had risen from the dead. "OH DEAR GOD!!!!" I kept screaming at the top of lungs. Soon evryone was saying "Kill Becky...kill her now..KILL!" WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON!?" I screamed "Don't worry it will be over soon."said my undead brother. "THE THE HELL IS GOING ON!?" I screamed again. While I was screaming they tied me to the right side up coffee table. " Becky Willson your destiny has come." said the killer. Soon every again repeated "Kill Becky..Kill her now...KILL!!!" "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" I screamed...That was the last thing I every said.....The End?
- by Ninja Cutiepie16 |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 02/09/2009 |
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- Title: Happy Friday the 13th,Becky!
- Artist: Ninja Cutiepie16
- Description: this is a short story I wrote in 2nd grade.....enjoy!
- Date: 02/09/2009
- Tags: happy friday 13thbecky
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- ConsultingHallMonitor - 02/02/2011
- it could use some details, maybe you should redo it now that ur older so itll be better..
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- Ninja Cutiepie16 - 07/09/2009
- No. I made up for a contest and got 2nd place.
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- PizzaToGo - 05/31/2009
- Is this a true story?
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