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• Artist: Loveisgrimmi
• Description: I think Its a little to short but hey It's mind so read it please on and sory for the errors
• Date: 03/20/2009
• Tags: kingdom hearts

Night
beasutful and strong
like the knight form the kingdom for whict how and light stay
close to my hearts as i cry upon the croned of the proch
to have the hope of the torch
giude me light
for the darkness that has speared the small hearts of me
guide me to see
hope
love
dream
night has not touched you
but only me
for i'm alone
cold
heartless

Comments

[Flight]

SPELLING - It is totally your only roadblock right now to really communicating a strong and passionate voice! Really, I see glimpses of a lot of great energy and passion shining through here, but it's like a camera with bad film<
No matter how great a photographer you are, without the right tools you can't show people the things you are seeing!
As a writer, grammar and spelling are your tools and once you have those you already have all the sk