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'BAM' my books hit the floor.'
'watch out you stupid emo kid' the boys laught at me.'
as i was picking up my books seth kicked me so i would fall on the floor.
then i just layed there felling i was no one that no one would exept me for who i am.i wish i just goto hell and stayed there for miilions of years i thought to myself.
hey u ok. i heard a soft and kind voice.
'ya, i guess so' while getting up.
"hey pick up your head."he said while putting his hand in my chin to lift it up. As soon as he put his hand down i put my head back downl.
"dont put your head back down it will make you more depreesed."he said throwing a paper envilope at me.
"the bell rang to go home a minut ago im going to be late." i thought to myself.
to be continued...............
in a book when i publish it
- by takoz da emo |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 04/10/2009 |
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- Artist: takoz da emo
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about an emo girl and how she lives her life
- Date: 04/10/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Sophisticated Person - 03/07/2011
- Some grammatical errors, some words need capitalization, and there are few spelling and punctuation errors too. Before you publish it, you should at least revise it. The story was okay, I think you could do better.
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- takoz da emo - 05/07/2010
- wat i mean im not finished with it yet
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- live1234the4s - 04/28/2010
- um not a good ending i mean i dont get it it not finished
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- Horrible Disfigurement - 11/21/2009
- Is this a autobiography?
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- AddictiveCupcakes - 07/16/2009
- ....LOL
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- CoffinCakes97 - 04/29/2009
- r u seriously emo? non-fiction is true stories
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- humpty_bumpty - 04/10/2009
- if it was longer it would be better. but it is good so far i hope you expand it
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