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Dwan got home and plopped down on the couch. It was dark out, and it was about seven-thirty or so.She went into the kichten. a note was on the table. Dawn picked it up. It read, "Went out. Be back whenever. - Dad". "O h. Of course he's out! Thanks a lot dad." Said Dawn. You see, Dawn has been an orphan ever since birth. She loved her step mom. She was loving, nice, understanding, calm and gentle. Dawn could never see why she married Doug. Suddenly, a piercing noise shatterd her thoughts. "What? Who's there? Hello?? Doug?" Called Dawn angrily. Something grabbed her from behind. Dawn got ready to fight. She let go of the things grip. "Who ARE you?" She asked, blocking grabs. "I'm Jak. You will be coming with me." Said a boy about the age of seven-teen or eight-teen, like her age. He had short light black hair, and black wings. Dawn gasped. "What are you....are you even human??" Asked Dawn, in a shaky voice. Half Human. Half dark angel. No more questoins." Jak said, in a chilling voice. "I'm not going with you!" Cried Dawn, about to punch Jak. Jak grabbed her fist, he crushed it in his. "I think you are." Dawn's hand started to bleed. Se grabbed her hand away. She tried to attack again, but he punched her in the lip. It started bleeding. "Uh!" She cried in pain. She was mad, she tried to attack again, but, this time Jak punched her hard in the head. She landed on the floor. Her sight became blurry, she could barley hear. She heard another voice. It was very faint. "Jak! Lea her alo! Co fi me!" Was all Dawn could hear before she blacked out.
Dawn woke up. It was sunny out, the birds where chirping. She was in a room. It has red walls, black floor and a black ceiling. They're where magiziens all the floor, and they're was a bedside table with a lamp. Dawn realized she was only in a long black T-shirt. She blushed. Who had changed her cloths? Was it the person who saved her, or Jak? Someone came into her room. He was about six-teen, maybe seven-teen. He had short very dark black hair, he also had kitty ears. "Hi. I'm Luke." Said Luke. Dawn kept staring at his ears. "Oh. I guess your wondering. I'm a Neko. We're half cat, half human. If you get dressed, come downstairs for some breakfast." Luke said. He tossed you a white tank top and some jeans. When he left, Dawn quickly got dressed and went downstairs. After about ten minutes, she found the kitchen. There was two more guys she hadn't met. "Dawn. Sit down and we'll explain everything. Said one of the boys. Dawn sat down. And, you will hear what the boys have to say in, "Who will She Fall For" Two. Hope you enjoyed, and I will try to make two as soon as possible! (A picture of Dawn at the bottom. I will put pictures of everyone as the story goes on!)
- Title: Who wil She Fall For?
- Artist: Kagurome
- Description: As if Dawn's life isn't hard enough. Her step mom just died, big tests are coming up, and she's only left with her alcoholic father who's never home. What happens when she gets taken away from home. Will she find out about her real parents? Will she even find love? Find out!
- Date: 07/12/2009
- Tags: dawn where realized omigosh
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Jaida20 - 08/24/2010
- i agree with Vibrant because it is short and u need to add more and it is really good!!!!!!! and the pic of dawn is jus amazing but remember this U NEED TO ADD MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- Vibrant Danie - 08/14/2009
- Why did you have to make this one short?? It's really good!! Love the pic of Dawn... You NEED to make more!!!!
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- pizairia_09 - 08/10/2009
- thats a great story need to add add more so i can read it further
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- Kagurome - 07/17/2009
- I know, right! Thanks. I'll make the stories longer, I had to do that one short.
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- Hikari I Am - 07/13/2009
- Nice story. Nekos are kawaii. ^_^
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