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When the sand in the hourglass runs out, you simply tip it over, then start again. That's what happens when you get killed by an intruder. An intruder in your body. The holy God above only waits for your soul to come , but he must wait, until the intruder leaves. The angels are by you and people are crying. But when the last breath manages to break from your lungs, you see a face. And it decides your fate. Now I bet you are thinking," Yeah Heaven or Hell" You are fogetting one. Halfway. That's right. Only 1 in 5 people get the halfway fate when they die. That means 1 in 5 people become a roaming spirit, as the Fate Angel calls it. In other words, a ghost. And each Ghost is stuck in an abandoned house. And are strictly forbidden to talk to anyone. And that means any one. You are allowed to make movements. And also try to prevent the Whole Life's discoveries. But when someone moves in your abadon home, its hard to resist. And that was the very first day, that I fell in love, and broke a major, humongous, rule.
Chapter 1:
My life was simple. Until the winter of 1890. That's when the Albrights moved into the Montgomery Manor. My abandonment house. I remember me sitting on my favorite bed, hearing a door knob turn. Since I was halfway, my body was not solid, like a human, but I still had my glow and shape. When halfway hits, your skin peels and your bones form into a better shape. I have my same ,boy face, but a diffrent shape. My black hair drooped over my eye a bit. Isat up and roamed downstairs. I stopped dead in my tracks. A family of 7 walked elegantly into the house. Exept for one. He was about 6. He broke into a ran and started to go up and down a staircase. The mother gave a little giggle. The father,although, frowned. The rest of the pack followed the Mother. There was two twin girls in little dresses holding hands and sitting on dusty chair ,"Marvolous" I heard one say. The other rolled her eyes. One boy started after the 6 year old boy. I guessed he was about 14 years old. But the last one, the eldest I suspected, was a lady. She was proper but had a look of mischief. She looked my age. Since no one could see me I decided to have a little fun. I swept up the stairs to the little boy and whispered in his ear, " Welcome, child," He glanced in a direction then shouted in an british acent," Is someone whispering over there, Margaret and Gweneth is that you?"
"No Charles, it wasn't" choroused Margaret and Gweneth at the same time.
He seemed confuzed.
"Huh" he said quietly. I made my way over to the oldest sister and whispered," I said it" I don't know why I was doing this so smoothly, but it felt right. Her expression was puzzled.
I touched her face for a second and she flinched. I didn't mean to scare her, but I could have sworn I heard her say," He-Hello?"
And thats when I understood I loved her.
Chapter two:
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- by l Whoresnop l |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 06/04/2010 |
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- Title: Loving a nothing.
- Artist: l Whoresnop l
- Description: Just read it! I love all the people that will! I don't even care if you rate I just hope you like it.
- Date: 06/04/2010
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- BlackCatlove1 - 06/05/2010
- i Love your story and i hope you write more of it! biggrin good job!!!
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