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When i look into a mirror
What do i see?
I see a girl
But who is she?
She looks very sad
and a bit stressed
she looks a little lonely
and kind of depressed.
but what is wrong?
what does she fear?
Shes frowning and crying
is she not happy here?
she should cry for help
before she does something bad
but as i look at her arms
she already had
brown scars and bruises
all black and blue
masochistic girl
whats wrong with you?
I continue to look at her
like shes a damsel in distress
then i finally realize
thats me in this mess.
- by Maryjustianna |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/20/2008 |
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- Title: Mirror
- Artist: Maryjustianna
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- Date: 11/20/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- revenantsmiles - 11/24/2008
- its nice biggrin very nice xD but you should try and work with the vocab and the ryhme scheme.. to make it more consistent, instead of rhyming every two lines, how about make them all rhyme or something? anywho, very beautiful
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- I_Rawr_At_Noobs - 11/22/2008
- it is really good..... but kindo of offensive to the Emo comunity. not all emo's live like that. some, just want to be left alone. (still no ofence intended)
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- Sweet Nanne - 11/21/2008
- I'm not emo, but I do like it alot.
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