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i love this feeling
a feeling so strong
i know this feeling
it wont last long
it is a new feeling
one that will open a new door
the door brings a smile
the smile brings a person
the person is everywhere
in your eyes
in your mind
in your heart
you dont want to let this feeling go
the feeling brings a person that is special
one of a kind
you feel like you have known this person for a long time
soon the feeling will fade away
like a song
it starts so loud
ends so soft it can end witha cheer
or a tear
the feeling will come again and again
you might not be able to find the special feeling
but it will find you
the feeling is strong
the feeling is
love
"ahh love "you say
please come again
- by Beyond A Rebel |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: love
- Artist: Beyond A Rebel
- Description: this poem i wrote because i got reminded of somebody that made me feel this way and i just hope he reads this and you like it
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- prettypink_kish09 - 12/06/2008
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hi nice poem...i see ure inluv...char
tnx for voting mah work...^_^ - Report As Spam
- Beyond A Rebel - 12/05/2008
- thanx
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- Dark_Clark17 - 12/04/2008
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I like it
5/5 ^^ - Report As Spam
- Beyond A Rebel - 12/03/2008
- thanx and i already did it was awesome
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- Kaira Angel - 12/02/2008
- Nice~ check out my poem Picture of Life, Picture of Life 2, Picture of Life 3~~~~
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- Beyond A Rebel - 12/02/2008
- thanx
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- Chrissy -27-20- - 12/01/2008
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oooo...i love it!I give it a 5/5.
Please read my poem Alone.Please comment it. - Report As Spam