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"312, 313, 314," That's how many seconds it has been since I took my life.
"298, 299, 300," That's how many seconds it's been since I droped the blod covered Knife.
"Five whole minutes," That's how long ago my pitiful existence was about.
:Five whole minutes," and now do you think anyone will notice, that's something I highly doubt.
TWO MINUTES LATER
My soul is staring at the lifeless shell drowning in it's own bloody pool.
It let's out a sigh, for there's mothing it could do, nothing for that poor worthless tool.
All around her no one ever cared, and she was to selfish to notice who did.
Instead she had to end it all, but everyone turned away and hid.
Did they realize now that when she was gone, that she held something for them all?
That maybe she was what kept them form their fall?
Or was it an illusion happening over again?
No one cared or noticed, not any that called themselves her close friend.
That's what she felt as the knife hit her with its final blow.
Those last days she felt this, but no one cared to know.
The last minute she cried countless tears,
because she was finally getting what she wanted and she feared.
Two last heart beats and one last breath,
and now she wondered if there was any peace in death?
- by Alibis of the Heart |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/01/2008 |
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- Title: Seconds Left
- Artist: Alibis of the Heart
- Description: The inner feelings held back tell the very end.
- Date: 12/01/2008
- Tags: seconds left
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Eggybird - 04/16/2009
- Deep. o__o
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- duir ancient - 02/10/2009
- I hate suicide... but even more do I hate the circumstances that drive a person to it. I like this. Grammar Nazi (me) trips over minor misspellings and errors, but salutes with all his heart.
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- Holds Devils Pot of Tea - 12/02/2008
- Wow your also very good at poem writing.I love how you described the first part then left everyone speechless at the end.I hope you keep it up cause your very good ^^
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- tip the van - 12/01/2008
- THAT.....WAS.....INTENSE!!! 1000/5!!
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- Pondy Is The Coolest - 12/01/2008
- Wow this was cryptic. You're talented, Sandy ^^
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- Rook219 - 12/01/2008
- I love the ending... leaves you... speechless...
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