Last Thoughts

• Artist: Phantom Geass
• Description: Its a poem!
• Date: 12/10/2008
• Tags: last thoughts

Last Thoughts

My life is nothing,
I can see the light,
please don't cry,
and don't lose sight,
of that blue sky,
in which i fall,
i will find peace,
in my buried hall.

Comments

[Phantom Geass]

thanks toxic

[ToxicDarknessLemon]

Hey sharpie ^^ Doint worry about that guy, he was an a** and has no idea about poetry *points to his poems* and anyway, poetry is a form of expression, so even if it sucks 5/5 ^^ ((It doesnt suck though))

[Phantom Geass]

come back when you can criticise properly

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

"wowsean wounderfull text. you got talent boy. " Are you insane? This is not too bad, mind you, but it is still a little uncreative and bland. Hmph. "talent" indeed/ I am unimpressed. 1.5/5

[Phantom Geass]

Thanks

[Kitthe]

wowsean wounderfull text. you got talent boy.