-{[.:Barely Alive:.]}-

• Artist: Kays Lullaby
• Description: this was my first poem I ever wrote.
  I know it isn't the best.
  But it came from my heart.
  So If You Don't Like it thats Too Bad.
  Comment?
  Please If Your going to be harsh Don't Comment.
• Date: 07/15/2008
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"Barely Alive"
By Ally Kay
I close my eyes I see us together, But why, oh why;
when I open my eyes,
I'm alone; Barley alive
The Kisses;
The Hugs;
The Time Together;
Was it all a dream?
I open my eyes ; Im barely Alive
I keep pushing myself Til' I know my dreams are lies.
Boy Are you feeling this?
The Kisses;
The Hugs;
The Time Together,
was it all a dream?
I open my eyes ; I'm barely Alive
Holding on what life I have left.
My dreams become nightmares.
Kisses becomes Fights, Hugs becomes Tears and Time together, becomes lonleyness.
So i'm going to pack up, leave so I can survive; Become free.
The Kisses;
The Hugs;
The Time Together,
was it all a dream?
I open my eyes ; Im barely Alive

Comments

[Kays Lullaby]

^0^ TY (L)*

[NoErinSpace]

*claps* i love it. giving you 5 stars just isnt enough ^-^

[xXRawr-GirrXx]

that was touching... i really liked it. 5/5