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I still remember you,
young and loving,
slowly learning to plunk out tunes
on my worn keys.
You never minded that I lapsed out of tune;
it was an adventure for you,
talking with the piano tuning man
about twice a month.
But then you grew,
your musical talent tossed aside
for a well paying job as a doctor.
In, perhaps, a tribute
to your love of music
you took me through three moves.
But now I’m no longer played,
you no longed painstakingly hammer out
masterpieces from your youth.
Papers and coffee mugs litter my top,
staining the wood.
Then one day you write it:
an ad for the paper.
Calling me an antique,
but saying “needs work.”
“Needs work?”
my oscillating key
never bothered you before.
But I guess its for the best,
now I have a new child,
a little girl,
slowly learning to plunk out a tune,
and trading songs
with the tuning man.
- by amarantineyes |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: Sold
- Artist: amarantineyes
- Description: This is a poem that was inspired by a classified ad and is written in the voice of the piano that was sold.
- Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: poem piano anthropomorphism
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Astaire - 07/15/2008
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You use the piano metaphor quite well. Very nice.
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- Lady Seinu - 07/15/2008
- The first time I read this I didn't really get it and I was all... "Huh?" But then I saw your description and had to read it again. That was very clever. I liked it a lot. ^^; And I play a very out of tune piano myself... xD But I love it anyway. Very clever ideed, keep up the good work.
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- Miss Piimpette - 07/15/2008
- Its very interesting and well thought out.
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