Patron

• Artist: PandaEnlightenment
• Description: So then. description, description...
  I wrote this poem about... well, I think it'll be quite clear after you read it. strangely enough, i was happy with my writing after i finished this.
  I'd like to hear what all of you have to say about its style and all that jazz, so please comment. :3
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: patron poetic lust

Why can't it be you
sitting there
in your bedroom
reading my journal,
your mind overflowing with
prose of seemingly poetic genius?
Why can't I be the one who wrote, with such passion,
an account of my days
filled with dread and love and
confusion?

It just isn't so.
No, for now, I am stuck in my
bedroom, writing an account
of my single day filled with
poetic lust.
Your stained-glass words tower over my humble abode, mud and brick
with a tiny window,
just large enough to see
you whistling as you go on your way,
and just small enough to hide me in
plain sight as I
write furiously within my
four walls.

Comments

[PandaEnlightenment]

hur hur. glad you enjoyed it. n__n
seems i'm going to be responding to my comments. 0:

[Cryomancy]

This oddly confused me with a feeling of anger, confusion, and neutrality. I thought this poem was overall very good.

[PandaEnlightenment]

thank you so very much! cD

[xxxemocuriexxx]

wow! i love it! i, too, am a poet, but yours is beautiful. thank you so much for sharing it with me on such a dreary day. ^-^