A Monster

• Artist: TNTFlip
• Description: This is a pretty emo poem I wrote when one of my friends was going through a really tough time. It kind of describes the nature of humans. THIS IS NOT WHAT I THINK OF ANY ONE PERSON!!!!!!
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: monster scary creepy dark

It lurks in the hallways,
it hides behind your doors
It the dark spot in all the corners.
It can see you through the walls and floors.

You may not believe me.
You may not think it's true.
But its hatred is always there.
The monster you fear is you.

Comments

[ekitten614]

It rhymes and flows REALLY nicely! Wow! I like the theme too, though it's just a little confusing that the monster is you and then that must mean that you are in corners and behind doors... but it's great anyway. It doesn't matter that it's short!

[Tibix]

could be better sound like one of mine but it dosent realy have that spark that people look for

[TNTFlip]

I know its short, because I really couldn't figure out much to say...I'm the kind of girl who say what I say and get on with my life. Kinda harsh, but thats me...

[whatwhat47]

this is good work

[HopeforLove]

Um, it's lovely, but exceedingly short, and bland...