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Blood stains on the wall,
furniture destroyed.twenty of
you're closes friends massacred.
each one killed differently,their
deaths bring you to revenge.
Destruction follows those who
seek revenge. The avenger will kill
until he's dead or his revenge has
disappeared. When he can prevent
death he'll be alive and unable to
kill anymore. And no one will watch
him suffer from his revenge.
- by darkfanglonewolf |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: "Revenge"
- Artist: darkfanglonewolf
- Description: blood, revenge
- Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: revenge
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Enigma Knight - 07/16/2008
- Uhm...It definitely is a very powerful poem, filled with anger. But I think you could work on spelling... I don't know about the incorrect punctuation...Is it intentional and by using it incorrectly you are trying to convey some hidden meaning? Or is it just plain laziness? By the way "thoughs" is not a word. I think you meant "those".
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