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a white dove passes
it brings good luck to the world
and brightens my day
i wave as it flies
it does a flip in mid-air
then it flies away
- by Xxgiggles_luvs_pandasxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: as the dove flies
- Artist: Xxgiggles_luvs_pandasxX
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Description:
a haiku i wrote in class for our projects
and guess what!?!!?!?
i got an a+ on it!!! - Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: haiku dove
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Comments (4 Comments)
- michicachan999 - 09/19/2009
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Wow, this is far more creative than I was expecting it to be. Haikus are sometimes a pain to put together, but you make it seem effortless. 10/10!! smile - Report As Spam
- Reakonte of twin blades - 05/11/2009
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awww, so good. *claps* vote back ^_^
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- StarLight_Angel_07 - 05/09/2009
- This was Piece was Beautifully put together..And She's quite the Rhymster. Kudos to you.
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- rasengan77 - 07/17/2008
- great! i love haikus!
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