Whirlwind

• Artist: ThoughtlessEndeavor
• Description: We all have times in our lives when we don't know what to do or where we stand. I wrote this during one of those times in my life and quite liked the relations I used. I hope that you can feel what I'm saying and understand and appreciate my poems meaning.
• Date: 07/17/2008
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No shoes,
No socks,
I walk
across the cold stone ground.
Who am I?
Where am I?
When did it come to this?
How did this happen?
All these questions
that I can not answer.
Looking to the sky,
The dark clouds float above me.
A sign,
A warning,
A storm,
A new danger.
Reaching out,
The rain drops on my finger.
The air gets colder,
faster,
The rain falls,
Lightning breaks the sky.
Everything begins to spin,
and the dizziness that swept over me
keeps me standing still.

Comments

[Eenamai1632]

i like it

[DizzieBat]

I loved this! ^_^

[x S a k u r a M]

Deep. I like it! 8D

FIRST!