Its Time

• Artist: BlazingXeir
• Description: This is a song I wrote at 10pm, for the sole reason the first line would not get out of my head. I hope you enjoy it i know its repeaing and not perfect. I would like critisism on this please. Don't just say it sucks. Thank you...and if you have a better title, I would like to hear it...really I would.
  (edit: i tried to fix the yhis, and make it this but i couldn't...so I mean this)
• Date: 07/19/2008
• Tags: time

Reflection on the water
Of the moon in a dark sky

Stars clouded over
When our dreams died

Can you remember
Our carefree days

When our eyes were covered
In an innocent haze



-chorus-
Times of flowers, times of change
Times of cutting loose

Bright blues skys, a hundred trys
To get this right



This right
Yhis right

The veil has been lifted
Over our eyes

We have grown wings
And taken to the skys

The dreams awakened
One last time

This time they wont die
And now its our time

Time to shine
And go back to

-chorus-

And this time

Its time
Its time for

Flowers, change and cutting loose
Bright blue skys, who needs a hundred trys

To get this right

This is right

This is now!

Comments

[BlazingXeir]

yeah...i'll fix that....and your right and thanks smile

[Phoenix Leonheart]

Totally awesome! How come all your good stuff is written late at night? Geez you're weird, and you spelled "this" wrong...with a Y....wow...

[BlazingXeir]

Thank you : ) and that is a better name. Do you mind if i switch the title i have now for yours?

[Teardrop Harlequin]

I would Call it the Time Circle, or maybe something like That...Its Really Good though, its not perfect of course, but its still Really Good.