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I AM THE POPULAR ARTIST
this is the perfect concoction
a miasma of fifteen dollar words
out of a hundred-dollar mouth
stiched piece-meal across the gaping
longing mouths of oh so many baby birds
and i will string together the best
of pop culture references
and i'll tell you how to thinkand
how to wear your hairand
why these clothes are in and those aren't
people will take this line and recite
and chew it and swallow it and digest it
but they can never eat its message
but i'll just say a couple of words right now
that are sure to make me the buzz of every single
internet search engine and every single
nonconformist/freak/dysfunction
salivatingmedicatingwrithingstrivingdrivingcrashingburning
cryingcuttingbleedingsmilingpilingtilingpotpourrifantasy
lustloveshovehatedatemasturbatehellsellfellscraperapetape
THIS IS SO F_____G ARTISTIC
you won't even believe me.
- by HUMIDIFIER |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/22/2008 |
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- Title: I AM THE POPULAR ARTIST
- Artist: HUMIDIFIER
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edited for gaia...thinking for yourself is in vogue
DON'T VOTE IF YOU'RE NOT GOING TO COMMENT - Date: 07/22/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- pleaseendme - 12/28/2010
- MCjack=such great fail. This is actually quite good. I really like the 1st stanza. The 2nd one is also very good. Like the 3rd one a bit less, but still like it. Only like it less because it gives the arrogant impression that you're the only one with any understanding of society or pain
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- ohCole - 06/12/2010
- So raw! I love it. Its like just real and very true. definatly 5/5 =)
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- mkjhfd - 07/23/2008
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i luved this
its so true and i think the some artists have to read this to realise wat they are...
u really managed how to say all that truth, making sense
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 07/23/2008
- super mega fail. if you failed anymore, i think you would make those around you fail as well. lets see, it's a crappy emo poem. you r NOT a popular artist. and didnt u yell at me for spelluing earlier? it's called a spacebar. my advice: find a map. locate the nearest mountain. jump off of it
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- Atheshya - 07/22/2008
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I love how your placement of words is always so artistic. It seems very appropriate that the second to last verse has no spaces in it... like a flurry of words you may hear in pop culture. Also, this has metaphor and imagery, which is a very, very good thing. Probobly could have been a bit longer, though...
I can't really see any reason NOT to give this five stars. - Report As Spam