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“The end”
My blood is like tears,
showing my pain,
as it spills upon the floor,
like the falling rain.
From the minute we broke up,
my heart ripped into 2,
how the pain was not as bad,
as me thinking,
"how will I live my life without u??"
Remember when we were kids,
how u always used to say,
I will never let u go,
not tomorrow,
not today!!
Remember how I believed you,
so I took ur hand, and you took mine,
how we walked around the earth,
without tears to cry!!
But u lied to me,
I can see u were a fake,
how u said u would never let go,
maybe it wasn’t, yesterday or even today,
but some ware along them years,
u changed ur mind,
and slowly,
ur hand,
departed from mine!!
So now im sitting here on the floor,
with a broken heart,
that cant love no more,
So I pick-up the knife,
as I get ready to end,
my already dead life.
As I pull it down my arm,
my blood is cold, but im not alarmed,
im silent and scared,
because u are not there.
I see the light,
im going to go,
tell my dear friends,
I love them so.
- by xxCuttie13xx |
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- | Submitted on 07/24/2008 |
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- Title: "The End"
- Artist: xxCuttie13xx
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This is just a poem i made, I was bored so i desided to see if you like it or not,
just a reminder, it was for fun!!! - Date: 07/24/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- chyeahh the great - 04/24/2009
- welll i hated it.... emo isnt lyk who you are... its a choice.. its ppl trying to get attention by continuously hurting themselves...emo is a choice and is frouned upon by everyone..... dont write lyk that! even if it was just for fun! think of the influence this is one young children who grow up with 'emo' siblings.... its just another fancy name for stupid idiots who say theyre going to take their lyfe cuz its not worth living!!! well you can change!!!
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- Saki_Assassin - 01/03/2009
- Wow such a wonderful poem u could definietly make something out of this~ I write poems about emo kind of stuff too but none of mine are as good as urs! quickly resembles my life! anyways 5/5 and wonderful work!
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- tia94 - 07/25/2008
- that is sooo emo. I liked the starting part. then the end freaked me out. lol. but that's how life is. "PAINFUL"
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- j-money10 - 07/24/2008
- its an emo poem
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- sk8rdie122 - 07/24/2008
- verry emo i like it
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- BETALOVER_96 - 07/24/2008
- That is AMAZING!!!!!!!! IJ could never write that good. Maybe if I tried hard enough. 5/5
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