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My heart is here to stay.
I don't know what to say.
Today is the day.
All I can do is stare.
Love is in the air.
Ask him if you dare.
Don't have a fit.
And don't just sit.
your path is still lit.
fin biggrin
- by Little Miss EpicFail |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/31/2008 |
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- Title: Love
- Artist: Little Miss EpicFail
- Description: I entered my art and I didn't do very good so I thought I could write a poem. I showed my mom and grandmother and they thought it was really good. If this one does well I will put in more because I do have a different one but I do not have it with me, but I think this one is still good. Comment and let me know how you like it!!!!
- Date: 07/31/2008
- Tags: lovekindsweetfromtheheart
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Comments (4 Comments)
- CarefulSong - 09/03/2009
- So cute! Umm...yeah keep on trying! I know you'll be very good at poetry soon~
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- Dudironimis - 12/14/2008
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1. the rythem is off
2. just cause it rhymes doesnt make it good
3. sounds alot like something i wrote in 2nd grade - Report As Spam
- BETALOVER_96 - 07/31/2008
- Ilike the rhyming
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- mbourg99 - 07/31/2008
- It's a little simplistic, but it's good. 3-4
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