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Close your eyes and picture a dark and rainy autumn night..
And in the darkness - A young boy - Under a dim little street light..
He's walking forward on a random path, a quite depressive sight..
Nowhere to turn, nowhere to go, suffering from the wind's cold bite..
Eventually, he stops walking, and focuses his gaze towards the sky..
And with raindrops alredy covering his cheeks, he suddenly begins to cry..
He feels so lonely - So lost - And a part of his heart just want him to die..
But he's not ready yet, to leave this world - Not ready yet to say good bye..
He thinks back upon the memories, wonders if this was the only way..
Remembers the words that she told him so clearly, what she used to say..
"Life isn't always easy, but things might certainly get better one day.."
Yet everything of importance to him seemed to have withered, it seemed so gray..
With little hope left to embrace, a sudden shiver was sent down his spine..
Was it even possible to recover from this, to one day once again feel fine..?
His fate seemed so cruel, yet what is destined to be isn't easy to decline..
And so he sent his prayers to the godly powers up above, to the divine..
"I remember how she said to me, that we'd last for all eternity.."
"But things changed, and now nothing is like we wanted it to be.."
"I know that life isn't simple, and that love can hold no guarantee.."
"But I beg of you, God up above - Find a way to set me free.."
The Final Prayer..
By: ~ Sataric
- Title: The Final Prayer..
- Artist: Sataric
- Description: I wrote this poem a while back, as a way for me to help process and deal with my inner emotions. English is not my first language nor my native tongue, so there might be a few flaws here and there, but I hope that you'll still be able to enjoy the poem for what it truly is ment to be - An emotional and deep reading experience..! Please leave a comment if you wish, and go ahead and read my other poems that I've posted here on Gaia - They can be found in my journal! *Smiles warmly*
- Date: 07/31/2008
- Tags: sataric
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Comments (3 Comments)
- pumpkinbella - 07/31/2008
- i agree
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- LunarViolet123 - 07/31/2008
- Thats amazing! The words u use just makes it really easy to imagine that u can actually c it happening biggrin !
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- Xxninja_piratexX - 07/31/2008
- Aw!! Thats so amazingly great!! It was so deep, I thought I was going to drown!! Hah, except not really.... sweatdrop But hoorayz! I give it five stars!! >w<
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