Burning sand....

• Artist: Xx-Mystra-xX
• Description: nowere u run is safe
  nomatter what u do ill still find u....
  
  [[dark poetry]]
• Date: 08/12/2008
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You walk through the valley
Ears shout eyes closed
Hoping I will not find you

But you will see
When the time comes to be
I am everything
From the air you breath
To the water you drink
I have seeped inside you

I am the blood that rushes with hate
The heart that beats with contempt
The sick thoughts that race trough your twisted mind
I am your fears lusts and hope
The cancer that swells in your soul

You walk through the valley
Eyes closed ears shout
Praying I will not find you
Knowing I will come

You cry and lie
But unconvincing
You do not fool the jester
You do not change your plot

I am your fate your inevitability
I am the shallow grave that awaits
The end you will not escape
And you are the life I will take

I will burn and turn you into nothing
I will strip you of your useless flesh
Pull you along
Your slow and agonizing death

As you walk through this valley
This valley of death
Eyes closed ears shout
Wishing you could find your way
But knowing you will forever stay....

Comments

[areyououthere]

i'm going back to the OP/L; it's apparent that no one here in the arenas knows a thing about poetry. i suggest you read Bukowski, Shakespeare, Ogden Nash, e e cummings, Butler Yeats, but not Edgar Allen Poe; stay away from that man.

[mitsumiko-minase03]

deep and very dark. when you said "eyes closed and ears shout", don't you mean eyes closed and ears shut? i don't know, maybe that's just me. other than that, there are some very dark stuff in that poem of yours. excellent work!

[Macabre_Words]

wow. very deep again. I lurv your work! Expect comments on all of your poems!