The Elevator

• Artist: Alka13
• Description: i had to write a poem for a school literacy magazine, and i thought what would be creepier than a strange elevator? so i wrote it.
• Date: 09/05/2008
• Tags: elevators creepy

Step inside,
Don’t be scared!
Plenty of room
No time to waste!
Elevators almost here!
Hold on a moment,
What did you say?
There seems to be a problem?
Wait, what’s that? Oh, of course!
No worries, everything is fine.
Ah, here is the elevator!
Step inside
Don’t be afraid
Where are the buttons, you ask?
Not to worry, you wont need them where your going
And where are you going?
Well, the answer to that my friend is, quite simply, wherever the elevator drops,
Once you get to the top, of course.
Goodbye!

Comments

[Farrelei]

Interesting and unique, however the rhythm kinda loses it's touch around the middle, then gets back into it again. I'll give you a 3/5.