Insanity Comes In Doses

• Artist: Collexis
• Description: Written in September...I think...I was given six random words and told that I had to make a poem using them, the were: "Muffin, Cellar-door, Nocturnal, Pharmaceutical, Pumpernickel, Optical" this is what I came up with...let me know what you think and remember to please be fair and honest.
• Date: 09/06/2008
• Tags: insanity doses muffin nocturnal pumpernickel

The cellar-door opens in the night
Beasts roam freely through my head
Nocturnal vagrants claw the surface of my soul
The optical nerves twitch from lack of light
Getting better is so much harder than it sounds
Through my pumpernickel muffi
Pharmaceutical dreams invade my mind
Stupid doctors
If they only knew where to find the demons
They need only find a mirror

Comments

[Cat of Ice]

its very nice.

[jerbear21]

wow intense i love this poem its so greatly wrote that i could picture all of the beasts coming out of your head

[Katsuo kun]

I'm still amazed at how you managed to use all those words and use them well. <3