Complicated

• Artist: Lets Get Deadly
• Description: This poem is very special to me and I think it's really beautiful. I wrote it during the summer. Please rate & review. Constructive-criticism is welcome.
• Date: 09/06/2008
• Tags: complicated

Terminated
Devastated
So emotionless
I feel sedated

Rip me up
Or tear me down
It doesn't matter
Because I refuse to care

You're so superior
You're so smart
You think I'm stupid
I think you're right

I'm so careless
I'm so selfish
It's so hilarious
Because I'm pathetic

Repulsive and empty
Lost and alone
Blind yet tormented
Dirty yet deserving

I'm everything that you hate
I'm everything that you fear
Burn me alive
I can't feel

Above all I am weak
More than anyone else
My soul is so fragile
Everyday feels like hell

Comments

[Lets Get Deadly]

Wow, thank-you so much! In all honesty, I was going for emotion. What you said means alot, and thanks for taking the time to REALLY read it.

[Renpaichii]

This can be interpreted in two ways, satire or emotion, in both ways it is an excellent poem. If it was satire you were going for, what I got was that you're basically telling someone to piss off because you're sick of them tearing you down. If it was emotion, I'd say that this is how most all people think about themselves. Either way you look at it, it's very true. 5/5

[VampirePrincessVermillion]

thats awesome