From outside

• Artist: AHazzamLeonA
• Description: One night, I felt like I wasn't myself. Like I was looking to me from beyond, it's a rare feeling, like you're not inside your body and everything seems unreal. That's when I wrote this.
  
  Comments appreciated. English's not my mother language, so I'd really appreciate any comment you have about this.
• Date: 09/29/2008
• Tags: from outside

Fill the void with pain.
I can still feel my limbs
Silently screaming.

A little whisper - a soul?
Maybe it is my spirit calling
far from beyond the atmosphere.

This feeling of sorrow
I can't live without.
A dying wish, I want to be seen.

Can you hear me
Crying in this room?
Dreaming for your touch
And the wisdom of your love...

Can my words reach
Your distant skies?

Comments

[Akorn23]

very good. sometimes i feel like im looking at myself doing something, like im not even me too