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Life itself has many secrets.
The world has more,
But when we disover the past of the world,
We all look away.
The Darkest Secrets that lay,
Unfolded and told.
Heaven pours the angels tears.
Everyone look at the problem you caused,
All because you read to far,
When you saw the World's darkest Secret.
Look at the God's Grey face,
As the rain falls,
Everything falls silent.
The sun peaks out,
His Happiness,
Has rose again.
- by JKL-Kiitten |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/08/2008 |
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- Title: The Secrets of the World.
- Artist: JKL-Kiitten
- Description: Ok i had my author moment here. lol. I hope you likie!
- Date: 10/08/2008
- Tags: life secrets
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Comments (1 Comments)
- findulias - 10/08/2008
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Really like the rythm and uneven ryhming patterns... mirroring untold secrets- fragments of gossip.. am i right? Really nice aptmosphere to it.... great poem!
Would have been 5/5 but grammar mistake in the last line ruined it for me. Pm though... id love to write an rp or poem with you... - Report As Spam