Whenever I love you

• Artist: anna-the-spanner
• Description: A set of Haikus describing the fantasy world of Love.
  Please nobody comment on mistakes in the number of syllables because I've probably made a few slip ups somewhere along the lines
  
  Cheesy?
  I think so >.<
• Date: 10/13/2008
• Tags: whenever love fantasy

Whenever you cry
Rainbows burst forth from your eyes
and I fall in Love

Whenever you Laugh
The sky dances with colour
and I lose myself

Whenever you Think
The room swirls with your ideas
and I am entranced

Whenever you Smile
Sunlight leaks from within you
and I burn for you

Whenever you Speak
I find myself needing you
I forget to breathe

Wherever you are
I feel your presence in my mind
and I miss you more

When you love me back
I'll retreat to my fantasy world
For it will be a dream

Comments

[sunnyface57]

awww, thats not cheesy that is beautiful...and by the way...who cares about the syllables because its always the poem that matters and your poem is beautiful!!!