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ashes to ashes and dust to dust
this is the phrase of when you lose someone
is that why ashes are gray?
to resemble your misery?
is that why dust can fly away?
to resemble how people can lose another easily?
the preist looks so uncaring when he says this
but doesnt notice the sadness around them
the weight of your heart as it fell through you.
love and hate are a thin line
sorrow and depression are as well
to death do you part
who's to say when death shall claim its victim?
death is cruel.
death is uncaring
death is unspeakably impacting.
does death create angels?
are they looking down on us?
- by bones-that-once-lived |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/19/2008 |
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- Title: ashes to ashes
- Artist: bones-that-once-lived
- Description: well, its really just a poem, i was thinking of my mom, and it came out on papper. so, um, hope you all like it
- Date: 10/19/2008
- Tags: ashes dust
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Comments (6 Comments)
- lostinmyselfxX - 10/22/2008
- hey man,you finally submitting your stuff? you should submit alot more, less papper flying around your dorm room,so you can get rid of the papper hurricane of poems and songs? so we can actually not worry aabout papper cuts walking in your dorm room? (people that agree with me, tell him so he can get rid of pappers!)
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- strawberryloveyuri2 - 10/20/2008
- and i love what you write there
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- strawberryloveyuri2 - 10/20/2008
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uh you right that Death is unscaring
and they looking at us - Report As Spam
- iBrightScales - 10/19/2008
- I agree with lovelawandordersvu. You should go back & edit it, then I'm sure it would be a lot better.
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- pinkdoggie7 - 10/19/2008
- great concept, but yeah, its kinda choppy
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- Love Requiem - 10/19/2008
- great idea - and some lines were very well thought out. I just felt that a few places were rushed and didn't flow as smoothly at it should
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