Love at first sight

• Artist: Sexual_Socks
• Description: something i made today
• Date: 10/22/2008
• Tags: love first sight

You sit
You stare
I watch
I glare
You feel faded
forgotten
left alone.
I pulled you up to the top
then let you slowly slide back down
i wish that i could say sorry
but your gone to far down
your a loser a snot
no one loves you
but then i slip down the edge
i sit beside you
you turn away
i move again
he came to help me to the top
i turn my back and i walk off
i stay at the bottom
down with you
im a loser a snot to
i pull you up
to are own place
and thats when you finally face
you let it out
i let you down
i want to be sorry
but how?
i go back to the top
away from you
im not loser a snot to!
i lied yes i did its true
i love you
i want to be with you
your still a loser a snot maybe?
i pull you up and chain you up
you will never fall again
i won't allow you
not within
i love you
i need you
why can't you see
your the one for me
i need you
you need me
but you slip away from me
out of my heart
out of my brain
don't leave my sight
its to late
you found a friend to be a loser a snot to
but i slip back down to.
But thats when you see
i won't let you go
not with out a fair share
you come to me
you hold me tight
you tell me to never fight
you push me up to stay on top
but you stay down
low to the ground
i guess you will never be
the right guy for me

Comments

[Ultra Mistique]

I still love the other one better but I like this one too. Minus the small spelling errors I see so much potentional. It is amazing how you have this anger and sadness.

[western_eyes]

your a loser -- should be "you're" not "your"
im a loser a snot to -- should be "too" not "to"
etcetera, this should be gone over for usage errors, however, i enjoyed it. i like the ambiguity.

[Master MandM]

good