Kiss Me..

• Artist: Bob of the Room
• Description: A short thing I wrote. It was to an ex-girlfriend.
  
  So you can imagine how I was feeling. :P
• Date: 10/27/2008
• Tags: kiss

Kiss me...

And don't forget the feeling.
Emotion is all important,
This lack is leaving me reeling.
Ready, steady, Go.


Do you really want this to blow away,
Dust in the wind.
During the night awake I stay,
Because I'm too busy crying.

Kiss me....


And don't forget the feeling.
It's my heart you'd been stealing,
But for just maybe, for now...
It's my turn to take a bow.

Give in to this implosion,
Then time to recollect and renegotiate.
Time for the closure,
Can you feel that?



Neither can I..

I wish I could love you,
Drown that sadness,
Which is long overdue.
But this is just madness.

I feel like this doll I love...
That this love isn't going to be one sided.
No more vague feelings, beloved.
It's all or nothing.

Comments

[mexicantacos2003]

very good. "its all for nothing"
i like that you ended with a note of "there is no hope" even though this poem was full of hope.


you cut me off at the end just right. not bad
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