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Maybe it was fifth grade.
The first time I attempted something beyond the hundred:
The two hundred.
It was a painful event, but I was proud.
A few meets later, I had dropped thirty seconds.
I tried the five hundred in ninth.
Twenty laps of burning agony.
No one cheered for me, and I was forgotten
By the girl who I trusted to count laps for me.
After some time, the numbered board was plunged into the water:
blank-7.
This year I swam it again.
Half is agony, half is an oasis for an over stimulated mind.
I flipped. Bree’s voice penetrated the water.
Rhiannon counted my laps, urging me on with her thundering voice.
One small act made all the difference on the final length:
Instead of a bright orange square,
I was greeted by a bold “69.”
She remembered.
Inspired, I confronted the wall, my arms gliding down
Legs rippling with impact.
I flew from the cacophony of cheering teammates
And felt that I had been reborn.
- by Tiefling Child |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/29/2008 |
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- Title: 69
- Artist: Tiefling Child
- Description: At swim meets, people have a hard time keeping count of twenty laps. We have boards with two sets of flaps that show numbers. At the base is the number nine, only one is upside down, hence 69. The other side is bright orange.
- Date: 10/29/2008
- Tags: swimming funny lonely bullying
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