the one i love

• Artist: Isinforyou
• Description: this is my first poem im actually a song writer but im trying sumthang new just comment me on how u like this if u want to look at one of my songs i have 2 posted on here...enjoy im going to cryy now :...
  
  
  
  
• Date: 11/07/2008
• Tags: love

shes my one love...
shes the one shes like a dove...
shes the one i feel for like a fool...
shes the one she always makes me drool...

sadly the one i love does not love me back...
she just uses me...
she acts like shes on crack...
shes the one cant u see...

she is the one i love....
shes the one who i can never...get enough...from...
shes the one i always think about...
shes the one she always makes me pout...

shes the one who makes me cry...
shes the one who don't love me back so i sigh...
shes the one i love the most...
even more than my fave band red host...

shes the one i will never forgive...
she makes me not want to live...
shes the one who broke my heart...
shes the one who tore me apart...

shes the one named Shae...
shes the one that i dream bout all day...
but sadly the one i love...
does not love me back...


end of all hope...
to my ex Shaelynn...i still love you... emo




crying

Comments

[mysticrydder]

one sentence: DONT EVEN THINK OF ENDING YOUR LIFE! its not worth ending your life over one person! and um well pining over a girl who is over you isn't healthy either. there are girls out there you might like too. your poem is quite depressing (thats not a bad thing) and you know how to use meter! just for that you get a 5/5.

[Menstrual Leakage]

Aw you made me sad =[

[Isinforyou]

ok thx man...

[buzz beamer4]

Awesome i fell the same way

[King Exseada]

yeah like use a more variety of words. and it's she's or she is!