Are you with me?

• Artist: slayerx97
• Description: Its one of my first songs that i wrote so plz give constructive critisisem.
  my band is called"love Kills slowly".
• Date: 11/10/2008
• Tags: none

Are you with me

I will go with the everlasting fight
I will go to the end of life.
I will go with a soring flight.
I will go in the night

(chorus)
When you hear ,me please tell everyone.
When your with, me please tell everyone.
When you love me ,please tell everyone to love!

People now can you see me.
People now can you hear me.
Watching now can you see me.
Im not here now ,can you see me!

(chorus)
Why are you hear ... why are you there...Why are you not with me!(bridge)
(chorus)

would you like me to be heart break.
Would you like me to be someone.
would you...would you...would you....WOULD!

(chorus x 3 )

Comments

[Ayleigh_knife_of_lust]

nice love it!5/5

[xXtickle_mexX]

i like your song very nice.you have nice taste in music..whats your favorite type of music rock,rap,country?

[slayerx97]

i swear if u guys do not comment i will go 2 ur profile and comment on it! xd :

[tksunshine93]

I like it...very original.....One small critique though you spelled would wrong but that doesn't really matter.It's still a great song!!!