I Miss You

• Artist: Eclairl
• Description: This is dedicated to my cousin who died last summer while I was at summer camp. She was only three years old.
• Date: 11/13/2008
• Tags: miss

I miss your smile
I miss your laugh
I miss the way you talked
But now your gone my heart is aching
I try not to cry always trying to wear a mask
But the memory of you has tears falling down my cheeks like rain
I miss the way that you'd look at me with those beautiful eyes of yours
All those happy memories leave tears of love and pain
Why did you have to go when you were so young
You had to fly away on your white feathered wings
I miss your smile
I miss your laugh
I miss the way you talked
But now all those happy memories leave tears of love and pain
Why did you have to go?
I miss you so
You had to fly away on your white feathered wings. cry

Comments

[Der schlect man]

How did she die?

[pretty300]

i luv the way u put things
u give it... meaning
u show us... passion
u speak with... love
and im sorry for your... loss

[MercurialNight]

Very nice, beautiful. The repetition is definitely a powerful element. "White feathered wings" is a great line, too, very orginal. There's good imagery in here.

[Miki_R a w R]

i apologize for your cousin dying at such a young age

- this is critique-
hm.. it's rather good, although i probably worked a bit more on rhythm.. but the repetition was really powerful, and i liked the line "You had to fly away on your white feathered wings" it makes you picture your cousin as an angel, even in this life. :3 i think it's really good.

[BUNBUN ready to runrun]

OMG~it's so sad..i'm sorry....

[airwonder]

i'm so sorry. i feel so sad.