Alone

• Artist: EyeKilledTheKat
• Description: i wrote this
  it may not be good but i did it anyway
• Date: 11/15/2008
• Tags: alonedarknessdeathdie

as i sit here
the darkness is creeping behind me
its just waiting just waiting
to kill me
and when it does
i will be traped forever
no were to go
no one to see
my loved one will be hurt
i will be alone
foever i will ramain there
you will froget the day you saw me
talked to me
met me
nothing i do will change my feelings
nothing i do will get me out of this darkness
i see the grim reapers sign
to do nothing
i cant refuse my fate
he gave me another sign
i follwed right to the light
i saw my love ones and they hated me
and i wanted to go back to the darkness
it was
warm
comferting
as i sit here typing every letter
i got closer to the darkness
that i need
want
and have to have
that darkness was the end of my life
i dont like the light
its has cursed me as long as i stay
~the emo girl that died in your nightmares~

Comments

[I screwed Princess Peach]

except for grammar and spelling, it was good.

[faux_fur_rabbit]

Awesome. I liked it. Hope you read my newest one. It's pretty good also. A little weird, maybe, but good. BTW, 5/5 on yours. ^.^

[dizzyree13]

it may not be good !!!!!
it was an amazingly deep and emotionally true poem