Suicide Note

• Artist: XxBeautifulxLiesxX
• Description: Most of my poems are about depression and broken hearts.
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: suicide note

Suicide Note
I wanna sit here and cry,
I wanna lay here and die,
I wanna lay by your side,
I wanna know what to say,
You fixed my heart when it was broken,
I wanna know why,
You say you don't care,
I say it isn't fair,
You just walk away,
I just lay down and tell my self not to cry,
But the tears run as my blood does down my arm,
I wanna know why you don't love me anymore....

Comments

[Amaria-chan]

It's pretty good, but remember poems don't have to rhyme, they sound just as good! razz 4/5. Please lookat some of my writing??

[Give Me A Hint]

it was pretty good 4/5

[Usaga]

I read your comment on some other girls poem about how you do better and was like "You're ON!!!" XD I am pleasantly surprised. I just started posting on here myself. . .

[prettycaity2]

I've Seen More Poems That Were Way More Sad smile
But I Liked So Yeah >.<

[PinBurst]

It's sad, I guess. Part of it rhymed, some of it didn't. Other parts sounded like a song, other parts didn't. Other parts look like it was just thrown in there. If I had to guess, I'd say you're trying and forcing yourself to write about this sad stuff because you want to move people, but it just shadows your real ability and makes you suck. I used to be that, too.

[better off without u]

That's so sad! *tear* I almost started crying!

[XxHuggles_KittensxX]

awww crying omg that is the sadist poem i ever read on here...